The bar chart shows coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cuties. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cuties.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart compares data about how much
coffee
and tea
drunk
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is drunk
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in 5 various cities in Australia.
Overall
, it was important that all of the cities' inhabitants except Adelaide went to the
cafe
for
coffee
or tea
while
a few of them bought fresh
coffee
.
According to
the diagram, a large number of Hobart, which was the main area with the highest percentage of drinking and buying hot drinks, citizen went to the
cafe
to drink tea and
coffee
owing to the fact that it was 63%;
then
Bought instant and fresh
coffee
respectively 54% and 39%. The second city was Melbourne, which had the same trend as the prior,
also
, it had the same proportion as the
last
one in the initial reason;
thereafter
, the instance was 48% and fresh was upper the 40%. Sydney, the third district had the same direction as Hobart, the main reason roughly the same as others;
furthermore
, two others have nearly the same percentage as 43%. The graph demonstrates that Brisban went to the
cafe
and bought instant
coffee
had approximately the same amount and it was about 55% after that fresh type was 34%.
In contrast
to all regions, a majority of communities who lived in Adelaide, which was the
last
town, went to the
cafe
by 50%. Later fresh was popular by less than 40%;
additionally
,
finally
, bought fast
coffee
was 34%
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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