The chart below shows what anthropology graduate fron one university did after finishing their undergarduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologyist in work after five years.

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the pie chart shows the percentage of destination of

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who graduate, the table demonstrates how their income varied after 5 years of employment. What grabs attention is that a large percentage of

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graduates

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obtained full-time employment. The pie chart shows,

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were nearly as finished as Full-time, with 52% of the students graduating.

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, it was followed by both part-time and unemployed groups at 15% and 12%

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turn. Not know had the same percentage as Full-time postgrad study groups. The rest of the pie chart/it was involved Part-time work postgrad study which

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included one out of twenty. Turning into the table,

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reveals that 50% of

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were employed in the public sector and made an average salary of over $ 100,000, as opposed to /

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with 40% and 30% of their peers who worked as Freelance consultants and Private companies. The average salary for 20% of

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who work in the public sector and do freelance was between $25,000 and $74,999 as same as 45% of the private businesses.