The line chart below shows the number of cars produced in three countries from 2003 to 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graphs illustrate the
number
of car
productions from three different countries including Argentina
, Australia
and Thailand
, between 2003 and 2009.
Overall
, it can be seen that the total number
of both vehicle productions of Australia
and Thailand
steadily increased over the 6 years
period. Correct your spelling
6-year
While
the number
of Argentina
's produced cars
showed significant
decline.
In 2003, the Add an article
a significant
number
of cars
produced by Thailand
was relatively low with
just below 200. Change preposition
apply
This
figure increased consistently and tripled its number
in 2005,
before continue rising to reach approximately 1000 in 2009. Remove the comma
apply
Australia
's cars
began with 300 in 2003, and then
slightly incline
to 400 in the next two years, before surging to the highest Wrong verb form
inclined
number
among three
countries in the end, with 1999. Correct article usage
the three
In contrast
, Argentina
began with the greastest
Correct your spelling
greatest
car's
Change noun form
car
production
, it experienced gradual
decline, by the end of the period, its Correct article usage
a gradual
production
was the lowest with 100. there was notable
point at around 2004, Add an article
the notable
a notable
where
Correct word choice
when
car
production
in all countries had the same amount.
In conclusion, both Australia
and Thailand
showed significant growth in car's
Change noun form
car
production
along 6
Replace the word
over the 6-year
year-period
. Correct your spelling
period
While
the number
of Argentina
cars
began with relatively higher, it decreased considerably to the same number
with
two others in 2004 and continued to the least in the end.Change preposition
as
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, car, argentina, australia, thailand, cars, production with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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