the chart and table below give information about population figure in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart and table below
shows
the value of Change the verb form
show
population
figures in Japan
during the period between 1950 and 2055.
In general, It is proven that the population
in Japan
was increasing
from 1950 to 2005. The highest Wrong verb form
increased
population
had
reached Unnecessary verb
apply
on
2005 but at some point, It will Change preposition
in
have been decreasing
before Wrong verb form
decrease
reached
the second lowest point for the next 50 years.
Wrong verb form
reaching
Japan
Change noun form
Japan's
population
is going to decrease extremely from 2010 to 2055 with only 89,9 million population
at the end
of period
. Add an article
the period
However
, the graph shows that the value had constantly increased from 1950 to 2005 with 84,1 and 127,8 million population
respectively.
The data also
tells us that the over-65s population
had increased from 1950 to 2005. In addition
, it is also
will have been increasing until 2035. On the other hand
at the end
of the predicted period, Japan
will only have 36.5 million of
old people.Change preposition
apply
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