The table shows the percentage of people with mobile phones who use various features on their phone between 2006 and 2010.

The table shows the percentage of people with mobile phones who use various features on their phone between 2006 and 2010.
The presented chart illustrates the percentage of individuals with transporting phones who used different abilities on their phones in 2006, 2008 and 2010.
According to
the information served, making calls, taking photos and serving and obtaining text messages were above half in all of the
years
.
However
, making calls was 100 per cent in 2006 and 2008, but, it reduced to 99 per cent in 2010. Using cameras was increasing every 2
years
by 5% which means in 2010 it turned to 76%.
Moreover
, send and receive text messages raised 2% from 2006 to 2008, in 2010 it raised 4% which made it 79%.
Furthermore
, gaming by using phones in 2006, was 17%.
On the other hand
, after 2
years
it increased to 42% and after another 2
years
, it fell to just 1%.
In addition
, searching on the Internet did not have any data in 2006.
On the contrary
, after getting data, it raised to 73% in 4
years
. Listening to music was increasing from 12% to 26%. Recording videos started without data and in 2010 had 35%. In conclusion, all the features were increasing. But, making calls and gaming were the only ones that decreased.
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