The charts below show the change in ownerships of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in housholds in oun country between 1920 to 2019.
The chart provides information about the relation
of
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between
number
of hours of Change the article
a number
the number
housework
and the percentage of electrical appliances per household during the period 1920 to 2019. It is clear that
the usage of electrical appliances has an increasing trend whereas
the amount of time dedicated to housework
shows a downturn.
First of all, refrigerator
was the least used electronic device compared to washing Add an article
the refrigerator
machine
and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
machines
cleaner
which rated roughly 5% in 1920. Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
However
it had a sharp increase to 55% in 1940, 90% in 1960 and reached a peak in 1980 at 100%. Add a comma
However,
Then
it remained stable until 2019. Vacuum cleaner
climbed up steadily from 30% in 1920 to 100% in 2000 Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
then
stayed constant until 2019. On the other hand
, proportion
of washing machine usage slightly fluctuated. Add an article
the proportion
It's
figure rose from 40% in 1920 to 70% in 1960 but had Correct your spelling
Its
an
fall in 1980 to approximately 65%. Change the article
a
Then
it increased constantly again to nearly 78% in 2019.
We can see that as number of hours of housework
per week, per household showed a decreasing tendency as more people started to use electronical
appliances. The figure Correct your spelling
electrical
electronic
of
the amount of time used for Change preposition
for
housework
dropped dramatically from 50% in 1920 to 20% in 1960. Then
it had a gradual decline until 2019 to 10%.Submitted by wjddbs2206 on
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