You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012 You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012

You should write at least 150 words.
The line graphs present the total amount of exported
coffee
from three different countries including
Brazil
,
Colombia
,
Costa
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and Costa
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Rica
, from 2002 to 2012 with 2
year-interval
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interval
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.
Overall
, it can be seen that all countries increased significantly in
coffee
exportes
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exports
exporters
over the ten
year-period
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year period
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.
Brazil
had
cosistently
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consistently
dominated the others,
which
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apply
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followed by
Colombia
. Unfortunately,
Costa
Rica
was
relativelty
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relatively
low at the start
,
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apply
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and remained the
thrid
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third
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place
at the
end
of the given period. In 2002,
Brazil
began
with
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in
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the
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apply
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second
place
at 12
million
kilograms lower than
Costa
Rica
.
It
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Its
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figure rose substantially, reaching 20
million
in 2008, followed by a minimal decrease to roughly 17
million
in 2012, and
then
surged rapidly to over 25
million
at the
end
.
Total
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The total
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amount of
coffee
exported by
Costal
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Costa
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Rica
had the
higest
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highest
number at
start
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the start
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, experiencing a notable drop
at
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in
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2006 with 7
million
, and
then
increased dramatically to 20
millions
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million
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at
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in
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2012, which
lower
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was lower
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than
Brazil
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in Brazil
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.
Moreover
,
Colombia
began with
lowest
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the lowest
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place
with 5
million
at
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in
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2002 and experienced some fluctuation between 2002 and 2008,
then
rose considerably from 2
million
at
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in
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2008 to 15
miliion
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million
at the
end
. In summary,
Brazil
hold
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held
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the first
place
in
number
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a number
the number
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of exported
coffee
by the
end
of the given period, which exceeded
Costa
Rica
that has the highest number at the beginning.
While
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apply
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Colombia
remained
Verb problem
had
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the lowest amount of exported
coffee
at the start and in the
end
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, brazil, colombia, costa, rica, place, end, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.

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