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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates data regarding the quantity of US
families
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 with five distinct annual salary scales in the years 2007, 2011, and 2015.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the numbers of
families
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 in the US with their
income
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 being less than 25000
dollars
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 or over 75000
dollars
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 experienced an apparent upward tendency throughout the period,
while
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 the quantity of US middle-wage
households
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 remained relatively stable. Looking at the diagram in more detail, in 2007, nearly 27
million
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families
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 earned an annual
income
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 ranging from 25000
dollars
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 to 49999
dollars
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, which was approximately 2
million
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 more than that of
households
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 with the lowest salaries. In the following four years, the number of the former went up by about 3
million
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,
while
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 the latter ascended by around 4
million
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.
In addition
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, the two groups whose
income
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 was more than 75000
dollars
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 witnessed a slight decrease, with the figure dropping to 14
million
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 and 28
million
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 respectively in 2011.
According to
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 the chart, the quantity of US
families
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 with the lowest
income
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 declined from 29
million
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 in 2011 to 28
million
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 in 2015.
In contrast
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, the
households
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 with the second lowest annual
income
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, which ranked first in 2011, saw a decrement of about 1
million
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.
Furthermore
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, the corresponding figure for
families
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 with a range of 75000-99999
dollars
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 in wages rose to 15
million
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, followed by 34
million
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 for the highest-wage
households
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. In terms of the middle family group, the number remained relatively stagnant, with it being 21
million
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 for 8 years.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words families, income, dollars, households, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Annual income
  • Household
  • Income bracket
  • Trend
  • Significant
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Distribution
  • Shift
  • Proportion
  • Rise
  • Drop
  • Plateau
  • Peak
  • Fluctuation
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