The charts below show information about the average spending of a typical household in four different countries in the year 2020 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show information about the average spending of a typical household in four different countries in the year 2020

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the disparity between the 4
countries
regarding the average purchase of a decent household in 2020.
Overall
,
while
the utility
sector
seems stable in four
countries
, every other
sector
including
Food
, Rent and Mortgage, and
Entertainment
varies conspicuously.
In addition
, most of the listed
countries
had a dominant
sector
. On the one hand, In Vietnam and Bangladesh, the spending of a typical household on sustenance is taking the lead. In Vietnam, a family could spend 60% of their aggregated money on
food
, which is more than 30% of the spending on
Utilities
, and 5% on the rest including
Entertainment
and Mortgage. In Bangladesh,
however
, they spent 10% more on
food
than Vietnam, 18% of the total spending is on
Utilities
, 10% on
Entertainment
- and 8% more on the Accommodation
sector
.
On the other hand
, the US
entertainment
sector
dominates the rest, with 40% of total spending,
while
food
and
utilities
are only 30% and 20% respectively, with the rest 10% in rental. Interestingly, in Singapore,
While
Mortage
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mortgage
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is less spent in other
countries
, 30% of the spending is on Rental and Accommodation, which is 9% and 18% more than
Utilities
and
Entertainment
, respectively.
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