The charts below show information about the average spending of a typical household in four different countries in the year 2020 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the disparity between the 4
countries
regarding the average purchase of a decent household in 2020.
Overall
, while
the utility sector
seems stable in four countries
, every other sector
including Food
, Rent and Mortgage, and Entertainment
varies conspicuously. In addition
, most of the listed countries
had a dominant sector
.
On the one hand, In Vietnam and Bangladesh, the spending of a typical household on sustenance is taking the lead. In Vietnam, a family could spend 60% of their aggregated money on food
, which is more than 30% of the spending on Utilities
, and 5% on the rest including Entertainment
and Mortgage. In Bangladesh, however
, they spent 10% more on food
than Vietnam, 18% of the total spending is on Utilities
, 10% on Entertainment
- and 8% more on the Accommodation sector
.
On the other hand
, the US entertainment
sector
dominates the rest, with 40% of total spending, while
food
and utilities
are only 30% and 20% respectively, with the rest 10% in rental. Interestingly, in Singapore, While
Mortage
is less spent in other Correct your spelling
mortgage
countries
, 30% of the spending is on Rental and Accommodation, which is 9% and 18% more than Utilities
and Entertainment
, respectively.Submitted by bendy.anhle on
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