You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates data regarding the percentage of average weekly spending by families in one nation in the years 1968 and 2018.
Overall
, it can be seen that the proportion of weekly income spent on food, fuel and power, clothing and footwear, and personal
goods
experienced an apparent downward tendency,
while
the figure for housing, transport, and leisure displayed a significant increase throughout the period. Noticeably, the number of household
goods
remained relatively stable. Looking at the diagram in more detail, in 1968, residents spent 35% of their weekly wages on daily food, which was approximately 6 times that of fuel and power. In the following 50 years, the former declined by nearly 18%,
while
the counterpart of the latter dropped slightly by 2%. In terms of the spending distributed to clothing and footwear and personal
goods
, they witnessed a decrease, with them dwindling to 5% and 4% respectively.
According to
the picture, the percentage of weekly salaries spent on housing increased from 10% in 1968 to about 19% in 2018.
In contrast
, leisure spending, which ranked fourth in 1968, saw an increment of 13%
at the end
of the period, followed by 6% for transport.
In addition
, the figure for household
goods
was stagnant, with it being 8% for 50 years.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words goods with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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