WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The bar graph shown above depicts the Australian general public's purchasing and drinking habits. For
this
data from 5 cities namely
Sydney
,
Melbourne
,
Brisbane
,
Adelaide
and Hobart was taken into consideration.
Firstly
, it can be seen that most consumers prefer to buy
coffee
or tea from cafes in all 5 cities studied. Cafe
consuption
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consumption
of these
bevarages
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beverages
was highest in
melbourne
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followed
subsequently
by Hobert at 63 % and 62 % respectively.
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A similar
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trend can be observed in
sydney
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Sydney
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at 61%.
Brisbane
and
Adelaide
showed the least cafe
consuption
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consumption
at 55 % and 50%
approximatly
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approximately
.
Secondly
when comparing instant
coffee
consuption
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consumption
. Hobart ranked the highest at 54% followed closely by
brisbane
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Brisbane
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at 53%.
Adelaide
and
Melbourne
showed strong 50% and 48 % instant
coffee
consuption
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consumption
.
Sydney
on the other hand
showed the least
consuption
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consumption
for
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instant
coffee
ranking at only 46%.
Thirdly
, fresh
coffee
consuption
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consumption
ranked among the least when comparing beverage habits.
Sydney
showed the most fresh
coffe
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coffee
purchase at 43% followed closely by
melbourne
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Melbourne
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at 42%.
This
was followed by Hobart at 38%.
Adelaide
and
Brisbane
ranked
the
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last
for fresh
coffee
purchase and
consuption
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consumption
at 34 and 33% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sydney, melbourne, brisbane, adelaide, coffee, consuption with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 4 times.
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