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The table below gives information about student enrolments at Bristol University in 1928, 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about student enrolments at Bristol University in 1928, 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table presents data on student enrolments at Bristol University in the years 1928, 1958 and 2008.
Overall
, it is clear from the table that the average number of enrolments experienced a significant rise,
while
 the variety of
students
 places of origin followed
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 trend. In
the
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1928, a significant portion of
students
 hailed from
area
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 near Bristol, but
this
 number dramatically declined to just 2% by the end of the period. The percentage of international
students
,
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 was at 5% from three countries, grew to nearly 30%, representing 98 countries by the close of the period, even though the increase
of
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 international
enrolment
 was not steady. From the start, student
enrolment
 steadily rose, beginning at 218, climbing to 1,046 and eventually peaking at 6377, in the year 2008.
Although
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the
persentage
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percentage
 of female
students
initially
 dropped by 10%, it
latrr
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later
 grew up from 32% to nearly 55%, overtaking the male
enrolment
, which stood at 46%
in
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this
 year.
Finally
,
male
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the male
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enrolment
 rate experienced
slight
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 increase from 58% to approximately 70%, before eventually falling below that of the
femalr
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female
students
.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, enrolment with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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