You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.

Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The diagram illustrates the alteration over the 19-year intervals of 1981 of manufacturing levels of the 3 dominant varieties of
fuels
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in the UK.
Overall
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,
while
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most kinds of propellant oscillated strongly over the years, most of them generally increased and were higher than the 1981 produced amount of Energy Units - abbreviated as
EU
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. There were
also
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certain shifts in the rankings of their production level On the one hand, Petroleum and Natural Gas
Fuels
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seem to augment the initial amount.
Initially
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,
While
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Petroleum
fuels
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started with roughly 90
EU
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, it reached its summit between 1984 and 1987 with 140
EU
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but went back to 100
EU
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in 1991, but from 1992, it steadily increased and back to 140
EU
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in 2000. Interestingly, despite the fluctuation, Petroleum still dominated the rest as being the most-produced energy unit for 19 years.
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, Natural gas, despite plateauing at 40
EU
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for 10 years, started to stably increase in 1991 to 100
EU
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in 2000
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exceeding Coal
fuels
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in 1991 as being the second-most produced fuel.
On the other hand
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, Coal energy decreased significantly from the started produced amount at 80
EU
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in 1981, decreasing to 40
EU
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in 1984 and going back and plateauing between 1986 and 1991 at 60
EU
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until constantly decreasing to less than 40
EU
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in 2000, staying as the third-most produced
fuels
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words fuels, eu with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fuel production
  • Trend
  • Steady
  • Fluctuations
  • Significant
  • Milestones
  • Turning point
  • Peak
  • Decline
  • Evolve
  • Notable
  • Summarize
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