The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six - art related subjects at a UK university in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the number of male and female students who studied six subjects related to art in the United Kingdom’s university during 2011.
Overall
, it can be seen from the diagram women
dominated in all subjects except art and design. The most
favourite subjects chosen by both the Correct quantifier usage
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gendres
English language and literature and the least selected by the Correct your spelling
genders
genres
men
were philosophy history and archeology
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archaeology
women
.
It is conspicuous that 250 of the women
studied English language and literature and men
were slightly less about
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than
Secondly
, the linguistics subject was studied by women
240 as compared to men
those were 180 in the same year. In addition
, the communication and media study was 225 by ladies and 205 by gents.
Probing ahead, boys were
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selected philosophy and girls 150, females took more interest in Correct pronoun usage
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subject. The second lowest subject was history and archaeology, it was 90 by men
and 120 by girls. Finally
, men
were the highest who studied art and design 175 and females only 160 in the same year.Submitted by rbtech65 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words women, men with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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