Write about the following topic: Should long-term job seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they give something back to the community? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

I support that long-term job seekers should be made to do voluntary work to give back to

the

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apply

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society. In our

communty

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community

today a lot of youths are jobless which

have

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has

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lead

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led

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to high drug intake. So

government

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the government

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creating voluntary schemes for jobs like social work, community cleaning and sensitization with stipends will be an advantage for the

communty

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community

.

Firstly

,I commend the

ministry

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Ministry

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of

Tetiary

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Tertiary

education

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Education

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for creating a

1 year

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national youth service scheme by attaching new graduates to various institutions for training,

this

improved their knowledge.

Additionally

,during the

last

cencus

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century

the government empowered a high number of youths as data collectors to enhance the collection of

datas

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data

dates

across the

country

, Jobs like

this

helps

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help

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in building the nation. I

also

recommend empowering adults

of age

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aged

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40 and above

for cleaning

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to clean

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of

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apply

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the

communtiy

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community

weekly to avoid disasters during the

raining

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rainy

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season like we

expierence

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experience

experienced

flooding,

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and mudslide

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mudslide

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mudslides

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in the previous years in some areas. Another method of empowering the elderly

ones

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is by farming in the provinces during peak seasons for various crops

such

as rice,beans,cassava etc. Our

country

have

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a very large

amout

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amount

of fertile land which will be of high

benefits

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benefit

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for

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to

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every citizen. I

belive

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believe

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creating various opportunities as explained above will be a boost to the community and we will see our

country

as a leading

country

in

africa

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Africa

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with vast opportunities for every individual to attain maximum

goal

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goals

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. In that

light

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light,

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i

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I

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recommend the government to look into

consinderation

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consideration

of the above empowerment schemes.