The chart below shows estimated world literacy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The graph illustrates the world literacy
rates
by
six different Change preposition
in
region
between Change to a plural noun
regions
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
in 2000.
World literacy Fix the agreement mistake
females
rates
show a significant gap between Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States, and South Asia
with another three regions both in two genders.
People in that areas
are likely to have Fix the agreement mistake
area
an
initiative to read books or Change the article
the
another
literature sources. Correct quantifier usage
other
For instance
, roughly 55 per 100 female individuals in South East Asia
has
habits for reading, Correct subject-verb agreement
have
while
over 30% men
Change preposition
of men
also
has does too
. Wrong verb form
have to
Same
pattern applied for Change the article
The same
Sub-Sahabaran
Africa and Arab States Correct your spelling
Sub-Saharan
rates
that has
a proportion Change the verb form
have
slighty
under. Correct your spelling
slightly
In contrast
, developed
countries people almost Change preposition
in developed
has
no feeling Change the verb form
have
to read
something. Change preposition
about reading
Meanwhile
in Latin America and East Add a comma
Meanwhile,
Asia
, the literacy rates
approach almost 10% for each gender, except on
East Change preposition
in
Asia
. Women in East Asia
has
Correct subject-verb agreement
have
a doubling
Correct the article-noun agreement
a doubling rate
doubling rates
rates
from men in East Asia
in reading a
text Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
rates
. Also
, the data shows women has
more ability and feeling to get Change the verb form
have
a new information
from reading something.Remove the article
new information
a piece of new information
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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