The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The bar chart compares the number of
people
who bought and drank
coffee
and
tea
in five Australian cities.
Overall
,
it is clear that
visiting a
cafe
to have
coffee
or
tea
was the most popular habit among customers in each city
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while
buying fresh
coffee
had the lowest proportion across the five regions. The percentage of
people
who chose
instant
coffee
ranked second compared to the other two categories. It is obvious that more than 60% of residents in Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart chose to visit a
cafe
for
coffee
or
tea
.
In contrast
, fewer than 20% of
people
in Sydney and Melbourne bought fresh
coffee
. Meanwhile, in Hobart, the proportion of
people
who went to a
cafe
for
coffee
or
tea
was double that of those who bought fresh
coffee
.
Additionally
, around 45% of customers in Sydney, roughly 49% in Melbourne, and approximately 54% in Hobart purchased
instant
coffee
. Focusing on Brisbane and Adelaide, both cities had the lowest proportion of regular fresh
coffee
buyers, at about 34%.
By contrast
, over 50% of customers in Adelaide preferred going to a
cafe
for
coffee
or
tea
, and exactly 50% bought
instant
coffee
.
Moreover
, in Brisbane, the percentage of
people
who chose to visit a
cafe
for
coffee
or
tea
was approximately 3% lower than those who bought
instant
coffee
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, coffee, tea, cafe, instant with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.

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  • survey results
  • coffee and tea buying habits
  • instant coffee
  • fresh coffee
  • cafe culture
  • social influences
  • economic factors
  • city demographics
  • seasonal trends
  • marketing strategies
  • consumer preferences
  • availability
  • popularity
  • consumption patterns
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