The chart below shows the percentage of unemployed people aged between 15 and 24 in five European countries in 2005
The provided bar chart illustrates the proportion of unemployment of residents from 15 to 24 years old in five European nations in 2005
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Poland
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Poland's
rate
of unemployed inhabitants was the highest for both the general and young people. Meanwhile, the unemployment percentage in Denmark was the lowest.
Having looked at the given picture for more details, in 2005 the figure for people who aged between 15 and 24 didn't have a job in Poland was nearly 36% which doubled over 2 times the overall
rate
. By contrast
, the proportions of young and total unemployed staff in Denmark were under 10%, particularly at 7% and 3% respectively.
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countries, Italy was the nation which had the second-highest Wrong verb form
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rate
of young unemployment at under a quarter which was more than Hungary's figure and Germany's proportion by approximately 10% and 12%, respectively. In contrast
, the overall
unemployed people rate
in Germany was 10%. At the same time, the two total proportions of Hungary and Italy were similar at 7%.Submitted by ieltswritingpracticedl on
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