The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the inforamtion by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the average variation in costs of three
metal
monthly in 2014.
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metals
Overall
, all trends fluctuated in this
period. In January, nickel
was the most demanding metal in comparison with other metals. In December, zinc
was higher than two
remained metals.
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the two
To begin
with, in January, nickel
had 6
% change in price, Correct article usage
a 6
whereas
copper
and zinc
were 2% and 1% respectively. From January to March, nickel
had a dramatic fall from 6% to 1%. Zinc
had an upward and a downward. Besides
, copper
kept its trend to decrease to around 0.5%. From March to May, all trends fell moderately. From May to June, again nickel
had a significant drop from around 0.7% to -3%. Also
, zinc
decreased a bit sharply from 1% to -1%. While
,
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copper
continued steadily with
around 0.5%.
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at
It is clear that
from June to September, there were fluctuations for all three metals. It can bee
seen thatCorrect your spelling
be
,
it started from an increase to Remove the comma
apply
steady
trend and Correct article usage
a steady
then
a drop. Ultimately, in December, zinc
with 2
% change in price was the highest value in comparison with Correct article usage
a 2
copper
and nickel
with around 1.5% and 1% change in price.Submitted by brightstargalaxy on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words nickel, zinc, copper with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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