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The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.

The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.
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A glance at the given chart depicts the
number
 of individuals who took part in a wide range of activities at one social
center
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 in Melbourne from 2000 to 2020.
Overall
, attending
in
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film clubs was the most popular action compared to other activities. It is obvious that the lowest rate of highlighted people
have
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 a tendency to participate in amateur dramatics in 2020.
In addition
,
number
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a number
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 of table tennis players dramatically
has
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increased during
this
 time.
Number
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A number
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 of people who attended
in
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flim
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film
 clubs experienced fluctuations and reached a peak of 65
participents
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participants
 per year. Prior to 2005, nobody would
rathar
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rather
 watch musical performances.
Moreover
, a mere 5 attendees in amateur dramatics existed in 2020.
Although
 all actions witnessed growth or even
stablity
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stability
 in
number
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a number
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 of attendees in the mentioned actions, amateur dramatic follows a downward trend. Both
of
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film club and material arts follow similar trends and
mentioned
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the mentioned
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 statistics remain stable during
this
 period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • participants
  • social centre
  • comparison
  • trends
  • consistently popular
  • gained popularity
  • lost popularity
  • community interest
  • availability of facilities
  • social factors
  • economic factors
  • external events
  • economic downturns
  • health crises
  • demographic changes
  • aging population
  • marketing
  • community outreach programs
  • participation rates
  • Melbourne
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