The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.
A glance at the given chart depicts the
number
of individuals who took part in a wide range of activities at one social center
in Melbourne from 2000 to 2020.
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, attending in
film clubs was the most popular action compared to other activities. It is obvious that the lowest rate of highlighted people Change preposition
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have
a tendency to participate in amateur dramatics in 2020. Change the verb form
has
In addition
, number
of table tennis players dramatically Change the article
a number
the number
has
increased during Unnecessary verb
apply
this
time.
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of people who attended Change the article
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clubs experienced fluctuations and reached a peak of 65 Correct your spelling
film
participents
per year. Prior to 2005, nobody would Correct your spelling
participants
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watch musical performances. Correct your spelling
rather
Moreover
, a mere 5 attendees in amateur dramatics existed in 2020.
Although
all actions witnessed growth or even stablity
in Correct your spelling
stability
number
of attendees in the mentioned actions, amateur dramatic follows a downward trend. Both Change the article
a number
the number
of
film club and material arts follow similar trends and Change preposition
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mentioned
statistics remain stable during Correct article usage
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