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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self- employed?

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 present time a large segment of
people
 pick to
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 for themselves,
instead
 of working for others.
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 phenomenon and
the
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 drawbacks. The main
reasons
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of
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people
 prefer to be
self employed
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self-employed
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 is can have the ability to choose whoever
you
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 want to work with
also
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choosing
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 the right time to work . Apart from that, citizens can spend most of their time with their
beloved
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and
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 family.
For instance
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instagram
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influencer
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influencers
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 and
youtubers
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YouTubers
 nowadays because of the high income and the freedom they
to
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 do what they want most. The only drawback of being
self employed
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self-employed
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it is hard to
startup
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 and
keeping
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 up with
low paying
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people
 should be
patience
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 and work hard for very long periods to be very successful .
For example
, owning
company
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a company
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 is very difficult to manage at the beginning it
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 so many sacrifices to get the benefits of it .
To sum up
,
people
 nowadays are more interested
to be
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self employed
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self-employed
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 rather than working in companies for many
resable
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reasonable
 reasons
nevertheless
 there
are
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 so
many
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hard working
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 should be done to achieve it.
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Clarify and expand on the drawbacks of being self-employed for a more balanced discussion.
structure
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content
The main reasons for choosing self-employment are stated clearly.
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