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This essay question is from Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 4 Writing Task 1. The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

This essay question is from Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 4 Writing Task 1. The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustration provided displays the various steps by which recycled products were made from plastic bottles.
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, it
consist
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consists
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 of 9 stages,
manmade
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a manmade
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, linear process, which starts with throwing
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bottels
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bottles
 in big street carbage
container
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containers
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 and
end
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ends
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 with manufacturing different things. First of all, people throw plastic
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bottels
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bottles
 in
a
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apply
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specific recycling street containers. The containers are emptied by special recycling
truks
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trucks
trunks
 in order to take them to the recycling
center
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centre
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, where
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bottels
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bottles
 are sorted
according to
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 their type, and only specific
type
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types
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 can be used. The
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bottels
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bottles
 are
then
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 compressed into
a big blocks
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a big block
big blocks
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. Following that, the blocks
where
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were
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 inserted in
two
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a
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wheels
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two-wheeled
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 crushing machine to make small
pecies
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pieces
species
, and thrown
in to
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into
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big
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a big
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 water container, so they
can
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could
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 be washed. After that, the small particles
where
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were
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 used to produce smaller plastic pellets by putting them into a pellet machine.The small
pices
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pieces
 turned
to
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a
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raw material by heat and under high
tempreture
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temperatures
 they
werw
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were
 molded into rectangular blocks, which
is
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are
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then
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 used to produce various products like, clothes,water
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bottels
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bottles
, food containers and bags .
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bottels with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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