This essay question is from Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 4 Writing Task 1. The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration provided displays the various steps by which recycled products were made from plastic bottles.
Overall
, it consist
of 9 stages, Change the verb form
consists
manmade
, linear process, which starts with throwing Correct article usage
a manmade
bottels
in big street carbage Correct your spelling
bottles
container
and Fix the agreement mistake
containers
end
with manufacturing different things.
First of all, people throw plastic Correct subject-verb agreement
ends
bottels
in Correct your spelling
bottles
a
specific recycling street containers. The containers are emptied by special recycling Correct article usage
apply
truks
in order to take them to the recycling Correct your spelling
trucks
trunks
center
, where Change the spelling
centre
bottels
are sorted Correct your spelling
bottles
according to
their type, and only specific type
can be used. The Fix the agreement mistake
types
bottels
are Correct your spelling
bottles
then
compressed into a big blocks
.
Following that, the blocks Correct the article-noun agreement
a big block
big blocks
where
inserted in Correct your spelling
were
two
Correct determiner usage
a
wheels
crushing machine to make small Correct your spelling
two-wheeled
pecies
, and thrown Correct your spelling
pieces
species
in to
Join the words
into
big
water container, so they Correct article usage
a big
can
be washed. After that, the small particles Wrong verb form
could
where
used to produce smaller plastic pellets by putting them into a pellet machine.The small Correct your spelling
were
pices
turned Correct your spelling
pieces
to
Change preposition
into
a
raw material by heat and under high Correct article usage
apply
tempreture
they Correct your spelling
temperatures
werw
molded into rectangular blocks, which Correct your spelling
were
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
then
used to produce various products like, clothes,water bottels
, food containers and bags .Correct your spelling
bottles
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bottels with synonyms.
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