The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart compares the variation of
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participants'
numbers among five different types of activities at a social centre in Melbourne from 2000 to 2020.
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, during
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period, the film club maintained the highest number of participants.
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table tennis and musical performances increased dramatically,
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amateur dramatics
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decrease. The film club was the most popular activity at the social centre, which remained at almost 65 in
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two decades.
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stayed at fluctuated below 40 at the same time. Plus, the figure
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amateur dramatics started at about 25 in 2000, and there was a mild growth from 2000 to 2005, but it turned to decrease significantly to below 10 in 2020. There was the sharpest rise in table tennis
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among
five types of activities, which began at
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16 in 2000, and climbed slightly to 20 in 2010,
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continued
saw an upward trend to 53 in 2020. As for musical performances, its figure had a stable increase and arrived at almost 17 in 2020.
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