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The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
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The chart illustrates the polluted
air
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by
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in
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 some public areas in
UK
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the UK
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 between 1990
to
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and
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 2005.
Overall
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, there is a significant decline in total
air
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 pollutants and the closest to
this
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 trend is industry.
However
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, transport and
households
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household
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 lines are fluctuating. On
one
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the one
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 hand, the reason why for the huge decline
for
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in
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total
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the total
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air
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 pollutants line is
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the industy
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industy
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industry
,
approximately
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with approximately
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 5.4 million
tones
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tonnes
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air
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of air
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 pollutants
which
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apply
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are made
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is
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 50% above
of
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apply
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the total
air
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 pollution.
On the other hand
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, transport and households are
the
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a
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 small part of the
air
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 pollution if we compare it with the industry section. There is
a
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an
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 upward trend in the transport line
after
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from
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 1999 years till 2005.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words air with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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