The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts
compares
the percentage of Change the verb form
compare
travellers
in a European city by the four transport modes between 1960 and 2000.
As shown by the graph, It is clear that
In 1960, travellers
prefered
to walk, but Correct your spelling
preferred
eventually
cars Add a comma
eventually,
become
the most popular transportation in 2000. Bike and walk saw the extreme Wrong verb form
became
declined
over the Wrong verb form
decline
40 years
period.
In 1960, over 33% of Correct your spelling
40-year
travellers
are
walked, which was almost 7 times of cars used by Unnecessary verb
apply
the
tourists. Correct article usage
apply
However
, this
number decreased as low under 10% in the year 2000. Despite cars
usage Fix the agreement mistake
car
were
low in the initial of the time frame, it saw Wrong verb form
being
Correct article usage
a rose
rose
become the most important transportation with over 35%.
The other two top Replace the word
rise
accomodation
Correct your spelling
accommodation
int
1960, 1980, and 2000 were busesCorrect your spelling
in
,
and bikes. In 1960, Remove the comma
apply
bike
had become the second Fix the agreement mistake
bikes
popular
transportation Correct quantifier usage
most popular
modes
of over 25%, but the data showed that there was decreased to roughly 5%. Fix the agreement mistake
mode
On the other hand
, the proportion of travellers
that travels
using buses Correct subject-verb agreement
travel
were
not that changed with Change the verb form
was
average
Correct article usage
an average
about
15% Change preposition
of about
withing
the period.Correct your spelling
within
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Vocabulary: Replace the words travellers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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