The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart displays the
number
of households with different yearly incomes in specific year
including 2007, 2011 and 2015 in the United Fix the agreement mistake
years
State
.
Fix the agreement mistake
States
Overall
, in the three mentioned years the number
of people
with an income
of 75.000-99.999 was stable at about 15 million
. However
, the maximum number
of US residents who earned an annual income
of more than 100.000 was about 33 million
in 2015.
First of all, with a quick glance at the chart
we can see the Add a comma
chart,
number
of people
with an annul
Correct your spelling
annual
income
50.000
-74.000 Change preposition
of 50.000
has
remained Unnecessary verb
apply
same
Correct article usage
the same
in
every three years and Change preposition
apply
is
about 20 Wrong verb form
was
million
. In addition
, the difference between the number
of people
with lowest
Change the article
the lowest
income
and the second level (25.000-49.000) approximately remain in same
amount in three years. Change the article
the same
Meanwhile
both of them grew up or dawn together.
The Add a comma
Meanwhile,
number
of people
with higher income
was about 30 million
in 2007 and it decreased in 2011 and touched 28 ,but with dramatic increase have experienced the highest percentage to 33 in 2015.Moreover
, the number
of people
earned
an annual Correct pronoun usage
who earned
income
of 75.000-99.000 has been in minimum proportion in every mentioned year.Submitted by n.fallahi327 on
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