The bar chart below shows of expeditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.
The bar chart illustrates the information that expenditure of five various categories
such
Food
, Housing,Change preposition
as Food
Transportation
, Healthcare
and Clothing in different four nation
the USA, Canada, the UK and Japan in 2009.
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nations
Overall
, it is clear that
most money
was spent on housing in all nations
except Japan. Healthcare
and clothing were the least amount
of expenditure.
In detail, Japan spent the highest amount
for
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on
food
the USA, which is around 23% and 22% was spent on housing and one in ten amount
only spent on transportation
but healthcare
and clothing were spent the lowest amount
. The USA spent more money
on housing, at around 26% and they used 17% of money
on Add an article
the money
transportation
, 14
% on Correct word choice
and 14
food
. United
States spent Correct article usage
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the
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apply
more
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most
money
on healthcare
as compared to other nations
, which is around 8 per cent and spending
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spent
least
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the least
amount
on clothing.
Furthermore
, Canada spent the highest money
on transportation
and clothing than other nations
but they spent the largest capital on housing, at 21% and a fifth cash for transportation
, 15 per cent on food
and 6% and 4% for
clothing and Change preposition
on
healthcare
respectively. The UK spent more cash on housing, at 24 per cent and a fifth for food
. Transportation
expenses was
15% and clothing was 6% but they spent a Change the verb form
were
little
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small
amount
on healthcare
and the UK spend
the least Wrong verb form
spent
amount
on healthcare
than other nations
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, transportation, healthcare, money, nations, amount with synonyms.
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