The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below illustrates how
plastic
bottles
are recycled.
Overall
, there are 9
districts
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steps involved in the process, from the initial stage of throwing away
plastic
bottles
to garbage
can
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cans
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to the eventual delivery of the finished products. Recycling begins when people abandon
plastic
bottles
to
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in
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garbage
box
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boxes
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.
Then
, these
bottles
are collected by the garbage
track
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and carried to
recycling
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a recycling
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center
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where the
bottles
are grouped
to
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recyclable or non-recyclable ones. Once sorted, recyclable
bottles
are compressed into blocks.
Then
, the blocks are chopped by two wheels and washed into the tank.
The stage
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five is followed by the process of producing
plastic
pellets and heating pellets to shape raw materials.
subsequently
, these formed raw materials are piled up and ready for making recycled items. eventually, these raw materials are used for producing different
type
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types
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of recycled items and these finished products are ready for delivery to the end users.
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