The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps
displays
the floor layout of Change the verb form
display
central
Add an article
the central
library
in the past (20years
ago) and its development in present.
Correct your spelling
20 years
Overall
, library
has changed and improved facilities for visitors to make Add an article
the library
there
more convenient for them by adding Correct pronoun usage
it
café
, self-service machines and sofas.
In the first map, Correct article usage
a café
library
had a reading room in the Add an article
the library
south west
corner Correct your spelling
southwest
that
is
replaced by Wrong verb form
was
computer
room Correct article usage
a computer
in
Change preposition
with
new
design. Add an article
the new
a new
Moreover
, the location of door
is changed and located on the left hand of Add an article
the door
entrance
. The Add an article
the entrance
space
for videos and computer games at the north west
corner Correct your spelling
northwest
in
the old layout has become larger and its function changed . Change preposition
of
This
space
contains two sofa
for visitors to sit and Change to a plural noun
sofas
listen
storytelling events, Add the preposition
listen to
in
addition
there are Add a comma
addition,
children
fiction books` shelves. The Change noun form
children's
space
between two
mentioned Correct article usage
the two
corner
that Fix the agreement mistake
corners
was
related to adult fiction books Correct subject-verb agreement
were
are become
smaller and replaced with all Wrong verb form
became
references
books` shelves.
The tables and chairs which Change the noun form
reference
are
located in the Wrong verb form
were
center
of the Change the spelling
centre
library
in the past are eliminated. Finally
, the space
of
children`s Change preposition
for
book
are changed to Fix the agreement mistake
books
lecture
room and a café is constructed on Correct article usage
a lecture
enquiry
desk location. The Correct article usage
the enquiry
space
between two parts that was
related to non-fiction books for adults Change the verb form
were
are
changed. Three self-service machines are located there adjacent to the café and shelves of adult fiction books with an information desk are located there.Change the verb form
is
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, space with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 5 times.
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