The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps
displays
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display
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the floor layout of
central
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the central
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library
in the past (
20years
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20 years
ago) and its development in present.
Overall
,
library
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the library
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has changed and improved facilities for visitors to make
there
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it
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more convenient for them by adding
café
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a café
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, self-service machines and sofas. In the first map,
library
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the library
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had a reading room in the
south west
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southwest
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corner
that
is
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was
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replaced by
computer
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a computer
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room
in
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with
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new
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the new
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design.
Moreover
, the location of
door
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the door
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is changed and located on the left hand of
entrance
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the entrance
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. The
space
for videos and computer games at the
north west
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northwest
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corner
in
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of
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the old layout has become larger and its function changed .
This
space
contains two
sofa
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sofas
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for visitors to sit and
listen
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listen to
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storytelling events,
in
addition
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addition,
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there are
children
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children's
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fiction books` shelves. The
space
between
two
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the two
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mentioned
corner
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corners
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that
was
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were
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related to adult fiction books
are become
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became
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smaller and replaced with all
references
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reference
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books` shelves. The tables and chairs which
are
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were
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located in the
center
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of the
library
in the past are eliminated.
Finally
, the
space
of
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for
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children`s
book
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books
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are changed to
lecture
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a lecture
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room and a café is constructed on
enquiry
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the enquiry
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desk location. The
space
between two parts that
was
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were
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related to non-fiction books for adults
are
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is
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changed. Three self-service machines are located there adjacent to the café and shelves of adult fiction books with an information desk are located there.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, space with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 5 times.

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  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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