The chart below showa the resultsof a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates what percentage of five Australian
cities
’ residents bought fresh coffee
, bought instant coffee
, or went to a café for coffee
or tea in last
4 weeks. Units are measured in percentages.
Correct article usage
the last
Overall
, in all cities
, there is the vast majority of people went to a café for coffee
and tea while
the least proportion of them bought fresh coffee
: residents’ percentage who prefered
fresh Correct your spelling
prefer
coffee
doesn’t transcend 50% in all cities
.
Melbourne, Hobart, and Sydney have registered the highest value for the category of going to café for drinks, accounting for 63%, 62%, and 61% respectively. Moreover
, they
are 3 Australian Correct pronoun usage
there
cities
, of which the most residents answered that they had bought fresh coffee
last
4 weeks compared to other cities
, maintaining more than 35%; particularly, 44% of Sydney’s population
, 43% of Melbourne’s population
, and 38% of Hobart’s population
’s drinking habit is mainly linked to fresh coffee
.
Brisbane and Adelaide have the lowest value for a group prefering
fresh Correct your spelling
preferring
coffee
. Meanwhile, Brisbane’s nearly 55% of population
has a habit Add an article
the population
to go
to a café for drinks, Change preposition
of going
Adelaide’s
only 49% Correct word choice
while Adelaide’s
has
the same habit. Correct subject-verb agreement
have
Conversely
, Adelaide’s half
Correct word choice
apply
population
has a tendency to buy instant coffee
. Brisbane also
have
a lot of people who bought instant Change the verb form
has
coffee
last
4 weeks, maintaining nearly 53%. Additionally
, only 34 % of its population
bought fresh coffee
, and the same trend can be observed in the
Adelaide.Correct article usage
apply
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, café, cities, population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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