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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart
illustrate
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illustrates
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 the amount of
households
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 by comparing their
aniversary
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anniversary
 revenue in
a 8 years
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an 8-year
 period.
Overall
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, it can be seen that there was an
unward
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upward
inward
 trend in
number
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a number
the number
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 of the
household
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households
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 and the amount of
family having
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families
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earning
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to earn
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 at least 100,000$ witnessed the highest figure. In 2007, there
was
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were
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 under 15
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millions
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million
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households
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 getting salary
rate
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rates
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 from 75,000 $ to 99,999 $.
This
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 was the group with the lowest quantity in comparison to the other four groups. In the following periods,
this
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 number continued
fluctuate
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to fluctuate
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 roughly and stood at exactly 15
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millions
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million
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 in 2015. The figure for families having income between 50,000$ and 74,999$ maintained
a
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apply
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stability throughout 8 years at 21
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millions
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million
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households
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. Both people with an
earning
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earnings
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 of less than 25,000 $ to 49,000$ followed the same trend, with a slight increase in 2011 and
then
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 a decrease in 2015. The former rose from 25
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millions
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million
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 to 28
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millions
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million
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 in 2015.
This
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 figure for the latter experienced from 26
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millions
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million
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 to 29
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millions
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million
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. The highest
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households
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number of households
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 recorded for people having an income of 100,000$ or more. Reaching at under 30
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millions
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million
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 in 2007 and
then
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 grew up to 33
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millions
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million
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households
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 in 2015. Word count: 198

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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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