The chart shows air pollution levels among four countries in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the environmental causes in
Elctricity
generation, Transport and Industry levels of Correct your spelling
electricity
the
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China
, America, Japan
and Australia
in the year 2012.
Overall
, China
rises
the most air pollution in the given chart as we see. But Verb problem
has
Australia
is plateau
over the pollution. Wrong verb form
plateauing
Futhermore
, America and Correct your spelling
Furthermore
japan
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Japan
is
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are
growth
but not reach Replace the word
growing
the
high amount of the count.
The industry Correct article usage
a
who
rose Correct pronoun usage
that
up
all over the country is Change preposition
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China
which goes 80% and then
Japan
is 44% approximate
. The transport facility which is highly increased is Correct word choice
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china
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China
in
70% pollution but Change preposition
with
Japan
also
reached 60% minimum. When we talk about the elctricity
generation so again Correct your spelling
electricity
china
reach
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reached
then
30% in the
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generated
. Verb problem
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Also
, we see this
time Australia
is increased 20% barley in electricity generation also
Australia
is dip all over the country in environment
causes.Add an article
the environment
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Vocabulary: Replace the words china, japan, australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
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