In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Some nations have faced
with
the phenomenon of Change preposition
apply
people
obtaining unhealthy weight and also
their bodies' well-being are
declining. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
This
is as
a result of two primary reasons; Change preposition
apply
unbalanced
diet and Correct article usage
an unbalanced
sedentary
Correct article usage
a sedentary
life styles
. The main solutions to tackle these threats are encouraging Correct your spelling
lifestyle
people
to do fitness-training
and Correct your spelling
fitness training
emposing
high taxes on unhealthy Correct your spelling
imposing
exposing
food
.
The today's
generation Correct article usage
Today's
are
used to eating fast Change the verb form
is
food
which in Correct article usage
the long-term
long-term
is life-threatening. Because Correct your spelling
long term
people
are working longer hours to provide for their families, they don't have enough time
to cook homemade dishes. As a result
, the willingness of people
to eat at restaurants or pre-cooked meals have
increased. Change the verb form
has
However
, these kinds of food
are mainly prepared by
Change preposition
with
low quality
ingredients and can cause heart and kidney Add a hyphen
low-quality
damages
. Fix the agreement mistake
damage
In addition
, as adults are busy at work sitting at desks doing computer jobs, they have less leisure time
. Despite this
, they unfortunately misallocate their time
on
less beneficial hobbies Change preposition
to
such
as playing games on their smartphones and watching tv
. Correct your spelling
TV
Thus
, people
get obese by spending their whole work hours and free time
being a
couch Correct article usage
apply
potato
.
Fix the agreement mistake
potatoes
However
, this
conflict can be easily solved by working out frequently. Goveners
should offer encouraging programs to citizens so they work out more often. More gyms with affordable prices and great facilities should be built in accessible Correct your spelling
Governors
Governers
part
of the cities. Fix the agreement mistake
parts
Moreover
, authorities can take action into their own hands and higher the taxes on unhealthy food
. The main reason that fast food
are
popular is that they are priced Change the verb form
is
reasoably
. The price decrease would lead to a growth in Correct your spelling
reasonably
people
's tendancy
to purchase healthier Correct your spelling
tendency
food
that are
more fresh and Change the verb form
is
advantagous
. Correct your spelling
advantageous
Consequently
, by consuming the same portion size of homemade well-ingredient food
people
get less
calories rather than Change the quantifier
fewer
low quality
Add a hyphen
low-quality
food
. For example
, dining out in my country is extremely expensive and there is 10
Correct article usage
a 10
percent
tax on them so cooking at home with fresh Change the spelling
per cent
ingredient
is more budget-friendly. Fix the agreement mistake
ingredients
As a result
, most of
Iranians are fit and don't have Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
a
confliction
with health issues.
In conclusion, Replace the word
conflict
althugh
not having Correct your spelling
although
proper
diet and frequent physical activity have caused serious worldwide Correct article usage
a proper
conflictions
, by taking two steps it can be tackled. Replace the word
conflicts
First,
the government have to build accessible and useful gyms and second,
the taxes on unbeneficial foods should be raised.Submitted by golnaz.zv on
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