The bar chart shows the number of cars per 1000 people in 5 European countries in 3 years and compares with the European average

The bar chart shows the number of cars per 1000 people in 5 European countries in 3 years and compares with the European average
The bar chart illustrates the number of
cars
per 1,000
people
in five
European
countries (
France
,
Germany
, Italy,
Spain
, and the UK) over three years (2000, 2005, and 2010), compared to the
European
average.
Overall
,
car
ownership
increased steadily in all five countries over the period.
Germany
consistently had the highest number of
cars
per 1,000
people
,
while
Spain
recorded the lowest figures throughout. The
European
average
also
rose gradually, though it remained lower than the figures for
Germany
and Italy. In 2000,
Germany
had the highest
car
ownership
with approximately 550
cars
per 1,000
people
,
while
Spain
had the fewest, with around 300
cars
.
France
and Italy had similar figures, both standing at about 450
cars
per 1,000
people
. By 2005,
car
ownership
increased across all countries, with
Germany
reaching 600
cars
per 1,000
people
,
while
Italy saw a significant rise to 520
cars
.
Spain
continued to lag behind, with just 350
cars
per 1,000
people
. The
European
average rose from 400 in 2000 to 450 in 2005. By 2010,
Germany
remained the leader in
car
ownership
, exceeding 650
cars
per 1,000
people
. Italy followed closely with around 580
cars
.
France
saw a moderate increase to 500
cars
,
while
Spain
continued to have the lowest figure, though it had risen to 400
cars
per 1,000
people
. The
European
average continued its upward trend, reaching about 470
cars
per 1,000
people
, still below the levels of
Germany
and Italy but slightly higher than those of
France
and the UK.
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