You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods (wheat, maize, rice) by people in four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods (wheat, maize, rice) by people in four different countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The table chart illustrates the information about the three basic foods which are consumed by people in four different countries including Cambodia,
Poland
,
Egypt
and Mexico.
This
data is represented in calories per person per day.
Overall
, it is evident that most people from Colombia prefer rice more than others,
while
Mexicans have the largest
consumption
of
maize
. Wheat is considerably consumed by
Poland
and
Egypt
.
according to
the
consumption
data, Camdobia has the greatest
consumption
of rice, accounting for 1,445,
while
Poland
has just only 501 and Mexico has 57. Wheat is more consumed by
Egypt
compared to
Poland
, with 1,095 and 865, respectively.
Maize
is the most popular in Mexico, accounting for 1083,
whereas
no one in
Poland
takes
maize
. In summary, the highest
consumption
of rice is Cambodia and wheat is
Egypt
, closely followed by
Poland
. Meanwhile, Mexican people enjoy eating
maize
, but no one in
Poland
consumes it.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words poland, egypt, consumption, maize with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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