You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the bar chart illustrates some information about the kids between 11 to 16 years old going to
school
by different types of means in the UK for one year.
overall
, walking and riding bicycles are favourable for the way less than 2,5
miles
while
using buses and cars
are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
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agreeable for the path over five
miles
. more than three-fourths of kids tend to go to
school
by walking for the path less than 1 mile
while
nearly half of them like to walk for way between 1-2
miles
while
approximately 75% of students ride a bicycle for the same
miles
,
although
half of them prefer use bicycle for maximum 1
miles
. going by cars and buses are not usable for
length
Fix the agreement mistake
lengths
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under 2
miles
. one-fourth and one-two of students go to
school
by walking and riding respectively for 2 to 5
miles
. more than 25% of kids use a car for 2 to more than 5
miles
while
half of them go to
school
by bus for 5
miles
in addition
less than 75% of them use buses for more than 5
miles
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, miles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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