The chart below shows information about Heart Attacks by Age and Gender in USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. • You should write at least 150 words. • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph shows the number of heart attacks registered in the USA segregated by age group and sex.
At first glance,
it is clear that
men of all ages had much higher figures than women
, although
, the disparity between the genders was the greatest in the 45-64 year bracket, where attacks in females were about 300 thousand less than for men. The difference sharply declines as many more older women
start to experience heart issues post-65.
It is also
notable how younger males reported a significantly lower count of attacks, which rose steeply as they hit 45 however
for females this
jump came after 36. Moreover
, in the 29-44 bracket only 3000 women
were recorded, which makes this
sample safest from such
complications.
Overall
, men reported greater numbers as compared to women
, and the likelihood of experiencing it became more likely for both as they aged, thereby reflecting heart health in older people to not be strong compared to younger individuals.Submitted by tahirascm11 on
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