The chart below shows information about Heart Attacks by Age and Gender in USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. • You should write at least 150 words. • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph shows the number of heart attacks registered in the USA segregated by age group and sex.
At first glance,
it is clear that
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, the disparity between the genders was the greatest in the 45-64 year bracket, where attacks in females were about 300 thousand less than for men. The difference sharply declines as many more older Linking Words
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start to experience heart issues post-65.
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notable how younger males reported a significantly lower count of attacks, which rose steeply as they hit 45 Linking Words
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jump came after 36. Linking Words
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, in the 29-44 bracket only 3000 Linking Words
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Overall
, men reported greater numbers as compared to Linking Words
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, and the likelihood of experiencing it became more likely for both as they aged, thereby reflecting heart health in older people to not be strong compared to younger individuals.Use synonyms
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