The graph below shows the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Swedon, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Swedon, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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1967 to 2007 regarding the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person, in different European countries. Regarding the graph, Portugal had a significant increase from 1967 to 1997, that continued steadily till 2007, almost reaching 6 emissions in metric
tons
. Italy from the beginning had 4 metric
tons
of CO2 in 1967
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increased sharply to 6 in 1977 and continued to grow almost to 8
tons
in 2007. The United Kingdom (UK) had the highest CO2 emission of 11
tons
,
however
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over the
years
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years,
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this
level
has dropped to approximately 9
tons
.
Situation
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The situation
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in Sweden is like in
UK
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the UK
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, but in 1967 it experienced confident growth to 10 metric
tons
of CO2. Unfortunately,
after
this
year, the
level
began to decline sharply and in 2007 reached its lowest
level
of 5
tons
.
Overall
, by 2007 the average
level
of carbon dioxide of given European courtiers don't differ much from the start of the graph. The
level
of CO2 became more stable somewhere
decrising
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decreasing
, somewhere increasing.
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