The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The picture

illustareate

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illustrate

illustrates

some information about

noodle

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the noodle

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process. All of the steps are done in a company except for the first step which is storage silos flour which brings by a trolly. In

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the secound

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secound

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second

step

flours

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flour

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pouring

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is poured

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into

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a huge dish with water and oil

that is

Linking Words

mixer

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mixed

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after

that

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that,

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they put in rollers in dough sheets. In

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the forth

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forth

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fourth

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section dough make them strips and

then

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they get in noodles discs

then

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they

cooking

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cook

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with oil and drying

atfer

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after

that they put in cups and

adds

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add

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some vegetables with spices. The latest process is

labelelling

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labelling

and sealing. In all making noodles has eight sections that produce noodles from flour

with

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apply

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using

speciall

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special

divices

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devices

that are in a

manufacure

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manufacture

the

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The

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material that

are

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used in

this

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product are water, oil, flour

that is

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the most important

one

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apply

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vegtetables

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vegetables

and

also

Linking Words

spices.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
23
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

140 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Manufacturing process
Noodle dough
Steaming
Cutting
Dough sheeting
Molding
Air-drying
Frying
Seasoning
Quality control
Packaging
Shelf life
Flavoring agents
Texture
Instant meal
Convenience food
Production line
Consumer
Ingredient mixing
Safety standards

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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantage and disadvantages of this?

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Around the world, more adults can work from home and more children can study from home as computer technology technologies become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. do you agree or disagree?

In the last few decades there have been more and more cases of famous people being hounded by the press. Some people think that famous people in the media have no right to privacy. To what extent do you agree?