The graph below shows UK air pollutants, measured in million tonnes, from three different sources between 1990 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows UK air pollutants, measured in million tonnes, from three different sources between 1990 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows the different reasons for air pollutants in British from 1990 to 2005.
Overall
, the industry was the biggest reason from 1990 until 2005 and it decreased every three years, for transport and households they were not increasing and were still constant, and the total air
pollutions
Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
show examples
in 1990
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
show examples
high but it decreased. Starting from 1990 the total air pollution was very high and between 1990 and 1993 it went down and every three years decreasing at a significant rate reaching 2005 were very different. The industry increased as well from 1990 until 1993 was not a big difference but it started to go down from 5 to 3 and from 1996 until 2005 was an almost constant rate, transport and households from 1990 to 2005 did not go up much nor did increase much, but it shows that transport has a little high rate compared to households.
Submitted by ahmedaziz9811 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Add more linking words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: