The graph below gives information on the number of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020
The graph below represents the participant numbers for several activities at a social
center
in Melbourne, Australia, over the years 2000 to 2020.
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centre
Overall
, the Linking Words
most
highest count of attendees was Film Club, Change the adjective
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while
the smallest result was Linking Words
Amateur
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for Amateur
dramatics
. Martial arts was the only participant to see a decline in admissions.
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Dramatics
On the other hand
, Film Club showed a very strong performance through the period, Linking Words
with
reaching more than 60 in 2000 and ending Change preposition
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less
than 70 in 2020 which is very well. Change preposition
at less
While
the lowest score amateur dramatics had a good result in the first two years with more and less than 30 but in 2010 started to decrease and ended with under 10.
Musical performances had 0 in 2000 and 2005, Linking Words
however
in 2010 the number began increasing and in the final year Linking Words
2010
it became a little less than 20. Add a comma
2010,
Also
, Table Tennis was one of the lowest rated, but it raised from fewer than 20 to over 50 and became Linking Words
second
highest rated number. Martial arts was between Correct article usage
the second
of
30 and 40 during these twenty years.Change preposition
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