Task 1: The diagram illustrates how recycled paper is made. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram describes the

process

of

paper

recycled.

Overall

,

this

is a cyclical man-made

process

with four main stages , it starts with making pulp and ends with producing recycled

paper

. Looking at the main first stage , used

paper

is collected and

then

it

Correct pronoun usage

apply

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mixed with water and chemicals.

In addition

, it

then

become

Change the verb form

becomes

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unfiltered pulp so that residents can purify to

mixture

.In the next stage was filter, the

mixture

are

Change the verb form

is

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cleaned and which

become

Correct subject-verb agreement

becomes

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filtered pulp.Especially, in the main

third-stage

Correct your spelling

third stage

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, the

process

of

made

Wrong verb form

making

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paper

will be

Verb problem

,

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added

Wrong verb form

add

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water and soap and collab with

increase

Replace the word

increased

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air pump into the

mixture

.

However

,one of the most

materials

Correct word choice

important materials

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was ink which chemicals very important in the

process

so that

paper

have

Correct subject-verb agreement

has

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light products

easy

Correct word choice

and easy

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approach

Fix the infinitive

to approach

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with

Change preposition

apply

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customer

Fix the agreement mistake

customers

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.

Additionally

, the

mixture

is cleaned again and dried.

Finally

,it paid off after a long

process

.