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Task 1: The diagram illustrates how recycled paper is made. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Task 1: The diagram illustrates how recycled paper is made. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram describes the
process
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 of
paper
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 recycled.
Overall
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 ,
this
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 is a cyclical man-made
process
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 with four main stages , it starts with making pulp and ends with producing recycled
paper
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. Looking at the main first stage , used
paper
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 is collected and
then
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it
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apply
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mixed with water and chemicals.
In addition
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 , it
then
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become
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becomes
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 unfiltered pulp so that residents can purify to
mixture
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.In the next stage was filter, the
mixture
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are
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is
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 cleaned and which
become
Correct subject-verb agreement
becomes
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 filtered pulp.Especially, in the main
third-stage
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third stage
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, the
process
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 of
made
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making
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paper
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will be
Verb problem
,
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added
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add
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 water and soap and collab with
increase
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increased
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 air pump into the
mixture
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.
However
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 ,one of the most
materials
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important materials
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 was ink which chemicals very important in the
process
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 so that
paper
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have
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has
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 light products
easy
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and easy
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approach
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to approach
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with
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apply
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customer
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customers
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.
Additionally
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 , the
mixture
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 is cleaned again and dried.
Finally
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,it paid off after a long
process
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.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, paper, mixture with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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