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The table below shows the projected costings over the next five years in American dollars for three environmental projects sustainable forestry.

The table below shows the projected costings over the next five years in American dollars for three environmental projects sustainable forestry.
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1)the table presents the projected costs in US dollars for three sustainable forestry projects over a five-year period. The pie chart illustrates the distribution of expenses for the first year
that is
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 divided into set-up costs, salaries, training and office expenses 2)Southeast Asia receives the largest budget allocation especially in the
last
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 two years
while
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 West Africa has the smallest and variable financing. 3)In year 1, Southeast Asia has a budget
at
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 $
30million
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30 million
 dollars which is significantly higher than West Africa(10,5) and Central America(20).
South-east
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Southeast
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 Asia’s funding will be increased to $40 million,
while
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 Central America and West Africa decrease.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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