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The table below shows the projected costings over the next five years in American dollars for three environmental projects sustainable forestry.

The table below shows the projected costings over the next five years in American dollars for three environmental projects sustainable forestry.
The table below provides information about the projected costings over the next five years in USD for three environmental projects for sustainable forestry. The pie chart illustrates the expected expenditure breakdown allocation for the first year as the projects are set up.
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, the vast majority of the environmental projects will have faced a decrease
of
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 the projected costings. Despite
this
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, South-east Asia will experience a progression
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 the table statistics. To compare with South-east Asia and the rest locations, South-east Asia will have
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increased from 30
million
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 to 50
million
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. Meanwhile, it is predicted that West Africa will go
downward
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 from 10.5
million
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 to 3.5
million
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 dollars and Central America will experience
decrease
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a decrease
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 from 20
million
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 to 5
million
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 by the next five years. It is clearly seen from the pie chart that
projected
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the projected
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 expenditure
of
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on
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 salaries is extremely high
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, with
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with
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at
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a
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apply
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50%,
whereas
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 Office expenses and training
includes
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include
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 10%.
Also
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,
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the set-up
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 costs
is
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are
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 about one of a third.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 81%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "set" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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