The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate.

The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate.
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The chart illustrates the result of a survey of minors' activities. The first diagram explains the cultural and free time activities that
males
take part in,
whereas
, the other graph shows the habits of females.
According to
the data presented for
males
, the highest activity for
males
is computer games ,
while
, the fewest one is reading, with 34% confronted 2% respectively. The most likely sport for
males
is basketball, at the same time, soccer is the second most likely sport (26% and 17% in order).
In addition
, listening to music is nearly as low as skateboarding, 10% and 11% respectively.
Additionally
, the most lovely habit for girls is dancing, but, listening to music is the most unlikely, 27% compared to 10% (as boys) respectively. Reading is the second lovely participating at 21%,
on the contrary
for boys. netball is not quite as likely as Computer games (15% and 16% in order).
Furthermore
, gymnastics are as unlikely as listening to beats, with 11% and 10% respectively.
To sum up
, boys and girls have the same percentage of listening to music.
However
,
males
are
on the other hand
females in reading and sports.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words males with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • cultural activities
  • leisure activities
  • participate
  • percentage
  • gender difference
  • similar participation rates
  • traditional gender roles
  • trends
  • impact
  • parental influence
  • extracurricular activities
  • accessible
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