The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newsport city centre from 2003-2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparations where relevant
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The given line graph shows the
incidents
of buglary
, Correct your spelling
burglary
car
theft
and robbery
in three distinc
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distinct
area
in Change to a plural noun
areas
Newsport
city Correct your spelling
Newport
center
from 2003 to 2012.
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centre
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that car
theft
and robbery
have relatively
stable Add an article
a relatively
number
of incidents
among the others throughout the year studied, while
buglary
activities Correct your spelling
burglary
on the other hand
, somehow saw a dramatical down trend
.
In terms of the biggest incident in the early period, it is apparent that Correct your spelling
downtrend
bulgary
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Bulgary
hold
the biggest Wrong verb form
held
number
at just bellow
3500 Correct your spelling
below
incidents
before reaching its peak at mere
3750 activities, Correct article usage
a mere
then
fell dramatically to its lowest of approximately 750 reports, and finally
experienced a plateau at just bellow 1500 until the final year period.
On the other hand
, car
theft
and robbery
remained stable from its
initial figures 2750 and 600 respectively in the first periodCorrect pronoun usage
their
,
and experienced a slight fluctuation before reaching their final Remove the comma
apply
number
at below 2500 for car
theft
while
the robbery
incidents
stick
to Wrong verb form
stuck
its
Correct pronoun usage
their
origin
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original
number
at
the final year.Change preposition
in
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Vocabulary: Replace the words incidents, car, theft, robbery, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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