The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram below will show you the whole process of recycling trash to things we use daily like clothes, bags, and containers.

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, there are nine steps of

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transformation. The first one is just throwing garbage into a rubbish can.

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a special car will take all the trash and ride it to a recycling plant. Workers will sort whole packs of trash, which materials can be recycled, and which not.

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the bottles compress into blocks and they go to a crushing machine which is made out of garbage, little pieces. The next step these small bits are washable.

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all the pieces fall apart into pellets. The next stage is heating pellets to form and make nice and clean row materials, which in one day will be your t-shirt, bag for school or container The best part of recycling

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cycle will never stop and all materials will

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forever and reused many times. It's very good for our planet because plastic rots for five hundred years.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

171 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Recycling process
Disposal
Collection
Sorting
Cleaning
Contaminants
Recycling center
Plastic flakes
Melting
Re-shaping
Raw materials
Transformation
Repurposing
End products
Variety
Sustainability

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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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