You have bought a new laptop computer and in a few days of purchase discovered amajor flaw, write a letter to the Company In your letter - Intoduce yourself - explain the situation - say what action you would like to company to take.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to complain to you about the HP computer
which I bought from your company.
My name is Roop kumar
and am your Change the capitalization
Kumar
reqular
customer who has trust on your company. I am working from home for a Bank as Correct your spelling
regular
a
accountant, Change the article
an
hence
a
need a Correct pronoun usage
I
computer
. I got postive
Correct your spelling
positive
reveiws
from other customers which made me to visit in your store.
Correct your spelling
reviews
Therefore
, last
monday
Change the capitalization
Monday
on
27th October I purchased a Change preposition
apply
computer
which seemed working very well. Even though, in the store
I opened all the applications and Add a comma
store,
check
the hardware. Wrong verb form
checked
However
, when I went to
home and Remove the preposition
apply
I
tried to install Correct pronoun usage
apply
Correct pronoun usage
it and
and
it did not work. sadly, I noticed a Correct word choice
apply
wire
Change the verb form
wired
computer
broken which made me sad.
Nonetheless
, the computer
came with one year
warranty card . so, I would like to ask for Add a hyphen
one-year
replacement
Correct article usage
a replacement
on
it or if Change preposition
for
that is
not possible I would
ask Wrong verb form
will
my
whole money back. Change preposition
for my
Moreover
,please send someone to get the computer
from my home as am out of the
town.
Please, feel free to Correct article usage
apply
conatct
me on my given number 12222.
I am looking forward Correct your spelling
contact
your
positive Change preposition
to your
promptly
action on it.
yours sincerely,
jagroopChange the word
prompt
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Grammar
Ensure all sentences are grammatically correct and free from spelling mistakes.
Content
Provide specific details about the flaw discovered in the computer as early as possible in your letter.
Content
Clear introduction and explanation of situation.
Tone
Polite tone and clear request for action.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.