You have bought a new laptop computer and in a few days of purchase discovered amajor flaw, write a letter to the Company In your letter - Intoduce yourself - explain the situation - say what action you would like to company to take.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to complain to you about the HP
computer
which I bought from your company. My name is Roop
kumar
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Kumar
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and am your
reqular
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regular
customer who has trust on your company. I am working from home for a Bank as
a
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accountant,
hence
a
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I
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need a
computer
. I got
postive
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positive
reveiws
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reviews
from other customers which made me to visit in your store.
Therefore
,
last
monday
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on
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apply
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27th October I purchased a
computer
which seemed working very well. Even though, in the
store
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I opened all the applications and
check
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the hardware.
However
, when I went
to
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home and
I
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tried to install
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and
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it did not work. sadly, I noticed a
wire
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computer
broken which made me sad.
Nonetheless
, the
computer
came with
one year
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warranty card . so, I would like to ask for
replacement
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a replacement
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on
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it or if
that is
not possible I
would
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ask
my
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for my
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whole money back.
Moreover
,please send someone to get the
computer
from my home as am out of
the
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town. Please, feel free to
conatct
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contact
me on my given number 12222. I am looking forward
your
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positive
promptly
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action on it. yours sincerely, jagroop
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Grammar
Ensure all sentences are grammatically correct and free from spelling mistakes.
Content
Provide specific details about the flaw discovered in the computer as early as possible in your letter.
Content
Clear introduction and explanation of situation.
Tone
Polite tone and clear request for action.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • flaw
  • introduce
  • verification
  • major
  • describe
  • malfunction
  • hardware
  • software
  • performance
  • replacement
  • refund
  • urgency
  • resolve
  • purchase
  • attention
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