The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The two pie charts
represents
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represent
comparison
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a comparison
on
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of
household
energy use and greenhouse
gas
production
in an Australian household
which is seperated
into various segments with percentages.
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separated
To begin
with
water heating and other appliances Add a comma
with,
has
the biggest percentage in an Correct subject-verb agreement
have
australian
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Australian
household
which
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apply
takes
up (23%) and (24%), each close to reaching a quarter of the Wrong verb form
taking
chart
, while
the rest takes
up equal or less than 20%.
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take
greenhouse
gas
production
water heating and heating and cooling occupies the bigger number of (25%) and (38%) acquiring more than half combined.
Cooking and standy has
the lowest percentage of Change the verb form
have
household
energy used, which only takes up 10% of the chart
combined. And less than 10% of the greenhouse
production
chart
.
In opposite, lightning and referigeration
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refrigeration
refrigerator
takes
up more of the Change the verb form
take
chart
of greenhouse
gas
production
compared to the
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apply
household
energy use. Overall
, it is proved that water heating along with
heating and cooling both posses
a good amount of percentages both in Correct your spelling
possess
an
Australian Remove the article
apply
household
use and greenhouse
gas
production
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Vocabulary: Replace the words household, greenhouse, gas, production, chart with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
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