The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The line graph illustrates the period between 2011 and 2018 with the
new
opened and closed shops in one area in those 7 Change the word
newly
years
.
Overall
, 2 lines have overcome each other all the time, and the leader is not exactly seen despite some years
.
In
Change preposition
On
one
hand, the closures that were less in 2011 had indexes a bit more than 6 Correct article usage
the one
thousand
, whereas
the openings were with eight thousand
and five hundred. However
, in the next 3 years
, they had six, seven, and almost the same indicator. So they have overcame
the opposite line for almost 2 Change the verb form
overcome
thousand
except the last
2014.
Starting in 2015, the situation was similar. For example
, in 2015, closures had reached the lowest indicator with 500, meanwhile, the opposite had 4000. The period of 3 years
after has a minimum of openings with 3 thousand
as a result
, leader on closings with 5 thousand
continuously.Submitted by bizhanalikhan6 on
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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