The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The line graph illustrates the period between 2011 and 2018 with the
new
opened and closed shops in one area in those 7 Change the word
newly
years
.
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Overall
, 2 lines have overcome each other all the time, and the leader is not exactly seen despite some Linking Words
years
.
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In
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On
one
hand, the closures that were less in 2011 had indexes a bit more than 6 Correct article usage
the one
thousand
, Use synonyms
whereas
the openings were with eight Linking Words
thousand
and five hundred. Use synonyms
However
, in the next 3 Linking Words
years
, they had six, seven, and almost the same indicator. So they have Use synonyms
overcame
the opposite line for almost 2 Change the verb form
overcome
thousand
except the Use synonyms
last
2014.
Starting in 2015, the situation was similar. Linking Words
For example
, in 2015, closures had reached the lowest indicator with 500, meanwhile, the opposite had 4000. The period of 3 Linking Words
years
after has a minimum of openings with 3 Use synonyms
thousand
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as a result
, leader on closings with 5 Linking Words
thousand
continuously.Use synonyms
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