The graph below shows information about the recruitment of teachers in Ontario between 2001 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure illustrates the information about the employment of educators in Ontario between the
years
2001 and 2007.
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Overall
, the percentage of English-language Linking Words
teachers
dramatically decreased Use synonyms
while
the percentage of French-language Linking Words
teachers
almost remained the same after 6 Use synonyms
years
.
The ratio of Use synonyms
teachers
, who speak French, increased almost to the start point, which was 70%, in 2003 after decreasing to just over 50% in 2002. The percentage of French-language Use synonyms
teachers
fluctuated over 4 Use synonyms
years
, Use synonyms
then
it increased to over 70% in 2007.
Linking Words
On the other hand
, English-language educators had over 70% in 2001. Linking Words
However
, it dramatically decreased to 40% in two Linking Words
years
. That drop continued to under 30% in 2007, after slightly increasing to just over 45% in 2005.
In 2001, the percentages of Use synonyms
the
French-speaking Correct article usage
apply
teachers
and English-speaking Use synonyms
teachers
were almost the same Use synonyms
with
around 70%. It can be seen that the differences between them widened by almost 50% in 2007.Change preposition
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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